Deleted Member Posted January 18, 2020 Posted January 18, 2020 Don't tell me that I'm perfect I can't live up to that Your pedestal is way up high I'll break when i fall flat Please love my imperfections And want me for my flaws The things I hide in daily life You'll see them when I'm yours For you I strip the pride away My body, soul and mind Naked under your hard gaze When you're cruel, warm, harsh or kind I'll always be my best for you I'll try to mask the cracks But please dont tell me that im perfect I cant live up to that ****this is the first time ive posted my own stuff online so please be gentle on the criticism guys
Wo**** Posted January 19, 2020 Posted January 19, 2020 That is just so absolutely beautiful! God! I wish I'd written that! It's gorgeous x
Deleted Member Posted January 19, 2020 Author Posted January 19, 2020 19 minutes ago, LazyPiratesBounty said: That is just so absolutely beautiful! God! I wish I'd written that! It's gorgeous x Thank you that's really kind of you x @PixieDust insisted I post it and your comment makes me happy I did xx
PixieDust Posted January 19, 2020 Posted January 19, 2020 1 minute ago, Devonsubuk said: Thank you that's really kind of you x @PixieDust insisted I post it and your comment makes me happy I did xx I am so proud of you for posting this, my friend, its truly beautiful, just like you
Deleted Member Posted January 19, 2020 Author Posted January 19, 2020 5 minutes ago, PixieDust said: I am so proud of you for posting this, my friend, its truly beautiful, just like you Thank you as always gorgeous xx
Deleted Member Posted January 19, 2020 Author Posted January 19, 2020 1 minute ago, SMEM_000 said: Beautiful words. Thank you
Ma**** Posted January 19, 2020 Posted January 19, 2020 well all I can say is it's brilliant, love it. Well done.
CaveBear Posted January 19, 2020 Posted January 19, 2020 Excellent piece of writing .. Well done .. And will hopefully see more ..
Deleted Member Posted January 19, 2020 Author Posted January 19, 2020 1 hour ago, CaveBear said: Excellent piece of writing .. Well done .. And will hopefully see more .. After all the positive replies you'll definitely see more. Thank you for the kind words Cave.
CaveBear Posted January 19, 2020 Posted January 19, 2020 5 minutes ago, Devonsubuk said: After all the positive replies you'll definitely see more. Thank you for the kind words Cave. More than welcome .. And look forward to it ..
Ma**** Posted January 19, 2020 Posted January 19, 2020 9 hours ago, Devonsubuk said: Thank you that's really kind of you x @PixieDust insisted I post it and your comment makes me happy I did xx well done to @pixiedust good call.
ca**** Posted January 19, 2020 Posted January 19, 2020 I really liked the pedestal reference.... so many people place themselves on it. Perfection is not about being 100% - it comes in all different forms. So your poem was pretty damn good (but not perfect!)
Deleted Member Posted January 19, 2020 Author Posted January 19, 2020 19 minutes ago, callipygian said: I really liked the pedestal reference.... so many people place themselves on it. Perfection is not about being 100% - it comes in all different forms. So your poem was pretty damn good (but not perfect!) Thank you x
shybif21 Posted January 19, 2020 Posted January 19, 2020 Under closer inspection you will find there is no perfection. If everyone achieved perfection then we would all be the same. Our individual scars of life make us special, and hope that we can become special to someone.
ca**** Posted January 19, 2020 Posted January 19, 2020 4 hours ago, shybif21 said: Under closer inspection you will find there is no perfection. If everyone achieved perfection then we would all be the same. Our individual scars of life make us special, and hope that we can become special to someone. THIS puts into words how I see it.
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