Deleted Member Posted January 20, 2020 Posted January 20, 2020 When you show me how you need me Harsh fingers knotted in my hair When I feel your eyes just watching My body rushing to prepare When i crave the words you're forming Knowing just how I can please When the way the tension changing Sends me dropping to my knees When we're no longer so uncertain And all we need for that is trust When my body lives to sate yours And fulfil all our souls' lust Then you'll own my true submission And your praise will feed my soul Then my gift to you is given And my heart now yours to hold
PixieDust Posted January 20, 2020 Posted January 20, 2020 Another beautiful piece of writing, my wonderful friend, thank you for sharing 💖💖💖
CaveBear Posted January 20, 2020 Posted January 20, 2020 Even better than the last .. Very well done and well written .. And i hope there is still a lot more in there to come out .. May have to have these hanging on the cave's wall ..
Deleted Member Posted January 20, 2020 Author Posted January 20, 2020 10 hours ago, PixieDust said: Another beautiful piece of writing, my wonderful friend, thank you for sharing 💖💖💖 Thank you always for the encouragement and patience while i test sentences on you. Xxx
Deleted Member Posted January 20, 2020 Author Posted January 20, 2020 9 hours ago, CaveBear said: Even better than the last .. Very well done and well written .. And i hope there is still a lot more in there to come out .. May have to have these hanging on the cave's wall .. Thank you cave, me too im enjoying it so much. X
PixieDust Posted January 21, 2020 Posted January 21, 2020 9 hours ago, Devonsubuk said: Thank you always for the encouragement and patience while i test sentences on you. Xxx Thank you but honestly not required......you write beautifully and I'm truly honoured you choose to share your words with me.....so thank you, I feel very privileged 🤗😘
Vandalslut Posted January 21, 2020 Posted January 21, 2020 Take a bow, Devonsubuk - I can write but I was never any good at poetry. This sings. XXX Blessings.
Deleted Member Posted January 21, 2020 Author Posted January 21, 2020 2 hours ago, Vandalslut said: Take a bow, Devonsubuk - I can write but I was never any good at poetry. This sings. XXX Blessings. Thank you Vandalslut and blessings xxx
To**** Posted January 21, 2020 Posted January 21, 2020 (edited) that is really really nice. Beautiful. Edited January 21, 2020 by TonyStarker
Deleted Member Posted January 22, 2020 Author Posted January 22, 2020 Thank you @verycherry76 and @TonyStarker all of your words make me try harder xx
To**** Posted January 22, 2020 Posted January 22, 2020 you should always follow your dreams..........without dreams life can be a night mare lol
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