Deleted Member Posted January 23, 2020 Posted January 23, 2020 Control this body, take charge with *** I give it freely, welcome the exchange Your power's so potent, a drug to my brain I know I'm in trouble, the limits were plain You knew I was testing, your face said it all Pushing at boundaries, trying to fall Tiptoeing that tightrope, precarious at best Maintaining eye contact, your smirk said the rest No words now needed, your gaze on the wall There hangs my end, my fated downfall My confidence dies as you take to your feet Eye contact gone, now regret and retreat Harsh ropes feel like thorns to my delicate skin Holding limbs tight stretched upwards and thin Crop tickling my skin, no way to escape I made this bargain, this is my place.
CaveBear Posted January 23, 2020 Posted January 23, 2020 Very well done yet again .. And i feel there is still a lot inside there .. Keep it up Devon ..
Deleted Member Posted January 23, 2020 Author Posted January 23, 2020 1 hour ago, CaveBear said: Very well done yet again .. And i feel there is still a lot inside there .. Keep it up Devon .. Thanks Cave as ever xx
PixieDust Posted January 23, 2020 Posted January 23, 2020 So happy to see this now live.........keep going my friend........so many more wonderful words to sing and share 😘
Deleted Member Posted January 23, 2020 Author Posted January 23, 2020 4 minutes ago, PixieDust said: So happy to see this now live.........keep going my friend........so many more wonderful words to sing and share 😘 So long as you keep helping me edit mate, your input and honesty is a vital part of the process xxx
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