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This is my sort of thing, loved reading this! Defo pictured me as daddy doing something like this before 🤤
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Wow you put that into words so well 🥵 I felt like I was daddy and didn’t want it to stop.
Can’t wait to read more of your stories 😘
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Great story. Thanks for sharing x
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Thoroughly enjoyed this 🥵 Thank you for sharing!
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That was very well written. You maintained a 3rd person narrative and it was to the point but also had vocabulary that was well placed so it didn’t seem like you were talking in a pedantic And, for me, the reader, you wrote ‘daddy’ in a way that the reader(me) felt comfortable to assume the character. You didn’t say anything anyone, within reason, is not capable of.. This sounds very ¿teacherey?.. but I thought I’d just write what I thought. Suffice to say I really enjoyed this piece and you are very talented. If I said anything to offend anyone, that sucks, and if you want DM. Cheers, M
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