Erotes-72 Posted July 28, 2020 Posted July 28, 2020 So here we go, elated by the number of views my first contribution to this forum received, I have recently been inspired to write again. Hope you all enjoy this simple poem Your Chattel The sound of your paddle striking my skin, The soft little murmur as I hold the *** in, Control in your voice, you demand I take more, Each blow exceeding the one dealt before Sanguine voice, you command I be still To take what is coming, to gratify, to thrill Endorphins released, your passion ignited The deeper my *** the more your delighted Grabbing my hair it’s my tongue you desire Gentle at first to kindle your fire Softly exploring your pussy and ass My tongue plunging deep into every crevasse As your passion rises no words need bestow The pleasure gained form my tongues very flow No instructions needed to guided or to steer Your body is all I now need to hear Your breath is erratic, your thighs start to shake The pressure is building towards an earthquake You pin me down tighter your whole body stiff It’s not long now Mistress till your over the cliff To encourage me more you return to the paddle A champion jockey with my face as your saddle Each strike lands harder, your reaching the line The pleasure you feeling is now quite sublime Your crop drives me now to meet your behest Informing me now that your reaching the crest I quicken my pace to meet your desire Conflagrant now, erotic flames jumping higher Your voice explodes, your heartbeats so fast The moment arrives, euphoria at last The hardest strike lands to tell me your there My flesh engulfed, my trophy to wear The joy of your love is all I now smell For my great reward my Face is your stele You crash down beside elated by battle “Well done my boy, my slave, oh my chattel”
PixieDust Posted July 28, 2020 Posted July 28, 2020 You know this is brilliant right? 💗💗💗 you just get better and better. Thank you for allowing me to have a sneaky ***k first 😘😘🧚♀️
Deleted Member Posted July 28, 2020 Posted July 28, 2020 I love this - I love your inspiration ❤ Amazing poetry 👏
li**** Posted July 28, 2020 Posted July 28, 2020 This is just brilliant, thank you for sharing your poem!!!! 💜💜
Deleted Member Posted July 28, 2020 Posted July 28, 2020 I think this is fantastic and brilliant read I hope you do more like this
Erotes-72 Posted August 1, 2020 Author Posted August 1, 2020 On 7/28/2020 at 9:47 AM, PixieDust said: You know this is brilliant right? 💗💗💗 you just get better and better. Thank you for allowing me to have a sneaky ***k first 😘😘🧚♀️ Very kind words and so appreciated coming from someone as creative as you @PixieDust. I also thank you for your help with the title. You are indeed a gorgeous and special friend
Erotes-72 Posted August 2, 2020 Author Posted August 2, 2020 On 7/28/2020 at 9:52 AM, lil-monster said: This is just brilliant, thank you for sharing your poem!!!! 💜💜 @lil-monster, Such generous praise my sweet. Thank you so much for your kind words. Your a beautiful lady with a gorgeous heart and your comments mean so much.
li**** Posted August 2, 2020 Posted August 2, 2020 3 minutes ago, Steve78 said: @lil-monster, Such generous praise my sweet. Thank you so much for your kind words. Your a beautiful lady with a gorgeous heart and your comments mean so much. You're welcome 💜 you write so beautifully 💕 please write some more you have a gift!!!!
Erotes-72 Posted August 8, 2020 Author Posted August 8, 2020 On 7/28/2020 at 9:51 AM, Incognitolady said: I love this - I love your inspiration ❤ Amazing poetry 👏 Such generous comments. I thank you so much for you kind words. You do so inspire me to write more 😘😘
Wo**** Posted August 8, 2020 Posted August 8, 2020 38 minutes ago, Steve78 said: Such generous comments. I thank you so much for you kind words. You do so inspire me to write more 😘😘 Hurry up with more then! That was one of the best poems I've read on here x
Erotes-72 Posted August 8, 2020 Author Posted August 8, 2020 6 minutes ago, Bounty said: Hurry up with more then! That was one of the best poems I've read on here x I’m humbled Bounty. Your words are so rewarding, such a huge compliment, they mean so much. We have some great stories and poems on here so for you to say that fills my heart with joy. I will write again soon. Thank you 😘
Gentle_Femdom Posted March 18, 2021 Posted March 18, 2021 Such vivid imagery; I feel like I'm there! Breathtaking.
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