Ta**** Posted August 12, 2020 Posted August 12, 2020 Ever hopeful hearts will lie Upon love's shifting sands, But love, like youth, will crack and dry Rent by time's bitter hand. In my wildest, wanton dreams Into your arms I'm thrust, Upon life's ever bubbling streams Where romance turns to dust. Oh! let desire take hasty flight And may love take a leap, And with one disenchanted breath, Fall silently asleep. Tammy N.
Deleted Member Posted August 12, 2020 Posted August 12, 2020 Not sure what the other ‘ffs’ comment is about, maybe they’re confused. I really enjoyed it 🖤
Ta**** Posted August 12, 2020 Author Posted August 12, 2020 54 minutes ago, Handsomebrutha said: You are amazing 💗 Thank you for your kind comment!
Ta**** Posted August 12, 2020 Author Posted August 12, 2020 34 minutes ago, Kinky_kat said: Beautifully written - i really like it x Thank you.
Th**** Posted August 13, 2020 Posted August 13, 2020 That was just divine, thank you. It really spoke to me.
Ta**** Posted August 13, 2020 Author Posted August 13, 2020 5 hours ago, Thebian said: That was just divine, thank you. It really spoke to me. Thank you for liking ..
Deleted Member Posted August 25, 2020 Posted August 25, 2020 It's such a shame you're profile criteria prevents me from being able to speak to you. Compatible or not, it isn't often you encounter someone with a fine grasp of poetic verse who also poses their potential suitors with puzzles to solve. The poem was fantastic, akin to something Thomas Hardy would have written - - I'm getting a beeney cliff type vibe. Once again, tis a shame we aren't able to at least have a platonic chat.
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