A kinky comic book tale!!!!

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36 minutes ago, Lillyth said:

Omg I shouldn't have read that whilst at my desk at work!

Very hot and well written Lilm ❤

Ha oh gosh 🙈 sorry not sorry Lilly 😂 and thank you ❤️

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14 minutes ago, christiana212 said:

Love it. I'm exploring writing too. Thank You for sharing, and please critique.

Thank you ☺️ 

[Mo****]

A very enjoyable story.  Thank you for sharing and you should definitely have confidence in your writing 💜

[Chastity_Pup_Gabbia]

Brilliant story lil-monster. It was interesting twist on the Lois and Clark dynamic. 10/10

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46 minutes ago, Morganna said:

A very enjoyable story.  Thank you for sharing and you should definitely have confidence in your writing 💜

Thank you hun, some days I do, other days not so much lol ❤️

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33 minutes ago, ChastityPup said:

Brilliant story lil-monster. It was interesting twist on the Lois and Clark dynamic. 10/10

Thank you pup!! I love all things comic book and superheroes/heroines and Superman is my all time favourite! ❤️

[Deleted Member]

I smiled all the way through (the hot bits notwithstanding!) - and I love that your Sir has encouraged you to put pen to paper LilM. More please!

[Sa****]

Love this, great piece. Keep them coming.🤗

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31 minutes ago, Curvykate said:

I smiled all the way through (the hot bits notwithstanding!) - and I love that your Sir has encouraged you to put pen to paper LilM. More please!

Aw thank you Curvykate. I will definitely do more!! 

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1 minute ago, Sara-Secrets said:

Love this, great piece. Keep them coming.🤗

Thank you Sara!!! 💓

[Deleted Member]

@lil-monster that was great, really enjoyed it. 

I will await the next one patiently 💓

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35 minutes ago, Tay458 said:

@lil-monster that was great, really enjoyed it. 

I will await the next one patiently 💓

Aww thank you 🥰 and it seems I'm writing a follow up lol!!! ❤️❤️

[li****]

Thank you to everyone who's commented so far on my story, it does really mean a lot and gives me more confidence to write more so thank you to all. ❤️❤️

[CylonBabySwitch]

Yes. This was freaking great.

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12 minutes ago, CylonBabySwitch said:

Yes. This was freaking great.

Thank you 😌

[PixieDust]

I'm so glad to finally see this up on the forum my *** 👯‍♀️ I'm going to be cheeky and say about ***y time 😁 ......you already know how I much I love and adore this, its just sooooo awesome😍😍😍.....and you so know Im going to be nagging you for more.....so chop chop get a writing, can't wait to read what happens next. 💗💗💗

[Erotes-72]

Captivating, arousing, delightful and sensational. Just a few words that articulate my views on this story. Your writing so transcends your confidence in your talent. When you ask us to go easy on you, did you mean for us to reign in our praise??

A delight to read and I so long for more. With that I thank you for sharing.

God dam, beauty and intelligence you so have both xx. Not sure if it’s you or your Sir that is the luckier one. Lol 

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8 hours ago, PixieDust said:

I'm so glad to finally see this up on the forum my *** 👯‍♀️ I'm going to be cheeky and say about ***y time 😁 ......you already know how I much I love and adore this, its just sooooo awesome😍😍😍.....and you so know Im going to be nagging you for more.....so chop chop get a writing, can't wait to read what happens next. 💗💗💗

Lmao 🤣 thank you my ***👯‍♀️ I can't thank you enough for your support with my writing, helps give me confidence ❤️❤️ I will more I promise!!! You can keep nagging me lolol 💙💙💜💜  

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2 hours ago, Steve78 said:

Captivating, arousing, delightful and sensational. Just a few words that articulate my views on this story. Your writing so transcends your confidence in your talent. When you ask us to go easy on you, did you mean for us to reign in our praise??

A delight to read and I so long for more. With that I thank you for sharing.

God dam, beauty and intelligence you so have both xx. Not sure if it’s you or your Sir that is the luckier one. Lol 

Aw thank you for your kind words, Steve!!! I'm blown away you're sweet thank you 💖

I will be writing more for sure, who knows this superhero story could become a thing lolol. Again thank you for your beautiful words I really am humbled!! 💙💙

[Deleted Member]

Thanks for writing your short story I enjoyed it.

Hope you write many more makes a change from reading books to read some comic theme of erotica bdsm dynamic.

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1 hour ago, Jen-5394 said:

Thanks for writing your short story I enjoyed it.

Hope you write many more makes a change from reading books to read some comic theme of erotica bdsm dynamic.

Aw thank you so much!!! I love comic books and the like so it may be something I will be doing more of for sure. 

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36 minutes ago, lil-monster said:

Aw thank you so much!!! I love comic books and the like so it may be something I will be doing more of for sure. 

Hope you write many more i do like reading this kind of thing from DC and Marvel theme based

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23 minutes ago, Jen-5394 said:

Hope you write many more i do like reading this kind of thing from DC and Marvel theme based

Yay!!! Superheros are my life lol and BDSM of course lol 🤣❤️

[Gi****]

What a creative twist on a relationship we all know so well. I particularly like the swishing of air ... is it Superman or is it that delightful head space one’s Sir brings about so easily.

 

Everso well done LilM and kudos for taking the plunge and posting here. Hope we same many more.

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12 minutes ago, delicia said:

What a creative twist on a relationship we all know so well. I particularly like the swishing of air ... is it Superman or is it that delightful head space one’s Sir brings about so easily.

 

Everso well done LilM and kudos for taking the plunge and posting here. Hope we same many more.

Aw thank you Delicia 💜💜 hehe it's a bit of both!!!! I am sure I'll get writing some more and maybe you'll see some more comic book tales with a different twist!!