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Our world in lockdown is indeed a dangerous place for our fragile minds and very existence. I have found dreaming of the new dawn, life after Covid, my coping mechanism. I share that world in humble words. I so hope they inspire x

 

Committal 

Your body is mine, you gave it to me
To pleasure and punish you gave your decree
So tonight my sweet the excitement is mine
With my paddle and plugs our passions aline

Tied and *** you are my treat
To excite and to tease, spank and to beat
To use and fulfil my copious desires 
 Rendering you *** your innocence expires

Arms and legs are tightly restrained
Your immediate future agreed and explained
For you are my toy to use through this night
For our mutual pleasure, just what a delight

My soft hand touch whilst my paddle explodes
So brutal the contrast your lust overloads
My toys in your body, no parts are off limits 
Your arousal my aim, measured in minutes

The night will be long, I’ll pleasure for hours
Relinquishing yourself to my humble powers 
A delight I so gleam with your growing pleasure
Your orgasmic joy is one I most treasure

So relish the lust I bestow onto you
The pleasure you seek so long overdue
For now I ignite the passion you seek
Your body my playground, my touch to critique.

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One of your best poems. So well written and arousing. Well done xx

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1 hour ago, Unicorn_30 said:

One of your best poems. So well written and arousing. Well done xx

Well thank you for such kind words. I so await you work on here honey

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19 minutes ago, NYshelteredwife said:

This....is....awesome!

Well thank you for that, I’m overjoyed that you think so x

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Much enjoyed, you certainly have a way with words

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14 minutes ago, Morganna said:

Much enjoyed, you certainly have a way with words

Your words are so kind my sweet, thank you xx

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6 minutes ago, lil-monster said:

Wow @Steve78 again another beautiful poem. I love your work ❤️

Bless you sweetheart, once again such kind words that mean so, so much 😘

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On 3/11/2021 at 1:04 PM, Jud4u said:

That’s amazing xx

Thank you @Jud4u, much appreciated 

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5 hours ago, Leisa said:

I loved this. Thank you.

@Leisato get comments on my poems is reward enough to write more, so I thank you 

Gentle_Femdom
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On 3/10/2021 at 11:24 PM, Steve78 said:

The night will be long, I’ll pleasure for hours
Relinquishing yourself to my humble powers 
A delight I so gleam with your growing pleasure
Your orgasmic joy is one I most treasure

Just, wow. Who wouldn't want to give you their treasure?

 

Poetry has always been elusive to me. But this, this was a joyful read. Well done @Steve78. Bravo!

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Glad to see your beautiful and delicious poem posted here in the forum.  Thank you as always for sharing with me and I am so glad that many others can now once again indulge in your poetic artistry 💗😘🧚‍♀️

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On 3/13/2021 at 8:04 AM, PixieDust said:

Glad to see your beautiful and delicious poem posted here in the forum.  Thank you as always for sharing with me and I am so glad that many others can now once again indulge in your poetic artistry 💗😘🧚‍♀️

God bless you sweetheart. Your kind words mean so much. When a truly talented wordsmith praises it so brings me joy. You are a true inspiration in life my sweet 😘😘

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On 3/13/2021 at 4:28 AM, Gentle_Femdom said:

Just, wow. Who wouldn't want to give you their treasure?

 

Poetry has always been elusive to me. But this, this was a joyful read. Well done @Steve78. Bravo!

Having read your work this is high praise indeed. My apologies that my reply is a little delayed, a lazy morning has allowed me to catch up.

Your kind words themselves are a gift to treasure x

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