PaganDawn Posted July 10, 2021 Posted July 10, 2021 Sometimes I write with words in rhyme What I cannot express in verbal times The thoughts that swirl.inside my head When emotions are full and need to be expressed. I hope you enjoy s glimpse into my souls About how I feel, what makes me whole **** In this world where I reside A constant presents walks by my side Holding my hand through *** and doubt A form I cannot live without. It holds my soul in gentle hands Controls my steps with subtle commands Guiding me to always strive Never letting my resolve subside. Who is this form I hear you say? Who journeys with you both night and day? He is my demon, he is my light He is the one who controls my life He brings me pleasure beyond compare He brings me *** without dispare. How can this be that you would give Your life to one who controls how you live? What power does he have to hold you so? Can you not walk alone, can you not just go? I have walked alone, thinking I was free I have walked with those that I thought loved me? But on my path I found That its not enough to just take a hand. This form takes more from me, than I alow the world to see. It climbs inside my very soul And tears apart the chains that hold The very darkest parts of me, and lays them bare for all to see. Who is this one who has such presence Who's strength and resolve can see your very essence? It must be strong and powerful beyond compare To hold and bind you in its snare? No my friend you have this wrong It did not come with strength alone It came with heart and passion and need It came with longing and want and greed It came to own and posses my soul It came to take and to Control But it is also weak and soft and kind It has its doubts and worries of mind It has a life like many do Full of stress and trouble too But in me it has found its release A place of safety a place of peace Where is can be all it wants to be A place where it can be truly free I give it strength as it takes mine I give it power to control and bind I surrender to its every need, I alow the darkness.a place to feed It holds me fast and I hold it Through times of trouble Through times of bliss I give it control, it gives me courage To just be me to grow and flourish And it has in me a place to be..completely open completely fee. It is not the clothes that make this one It is not the stature it is not just the Dom It is the way he gets inside.. Sees my soul, feeds my mind. In rags or riches it would be the same It is not the fortune it is not the name It is everything he sees inside It is how he takes what he requires It is how he allowes me to be To give to release to serve and be free In chains or cuffs, restraints or collar In *** or tears or ***ful *** I am exactly what he allows me to be For he has knows the real me And I will skip and step with pride As I walk behind his left side My path is his to choose for me Without reserve So.mote it be.
ol**** Posted July 10, 2021 Posted July 10, 2021 Wonderfully expressive writing made more real by the occasional spelling error. The emotion trancends the spelling.
Deleted Member Posted July 10, 2021 Posted July 10, 2021 @Oldfellow ***y hell its not a spelling contest!! Or an exam Thanks for your input but not needed... Some people... Take no notice of Bamber Gascoigne lol ❤️❤️
Deleted Member Posted July 10, 2021 Posted July 10, 2021 PD ….. What a beautiful piece of poetry, such thoughtful insights into your World! Have a great weekend 🤩🥰🙏❤️
Wo**** Posted July 10, 2021 Posted July 10, 2021 1 hour ago, ShropshireDom66 said: @Oldfellow ***y hell its not a spelling contest!! Or an exam Thanks for your input but not needed... Some people... Take no notice of Bamber Gascoigne lol ❤️❤️ White knight syndrome? Ever heard of constructive criticism? Do you know that the OP would object to old fellows comment?
Th**** Posted July 10, 2021 Posted July 10, 2021 It is so hard to put the inexpressible down in words. Your words carried such an empowered tranquillity that it highlighted the narrative. Bravo!
PaganDawn Posted July 18, 2021 Author Posted July 18, 2021 Thank you all so much.. Glad you enjoyed a ***k into my soul x
Erotes-72 Posted July 20, 2021 Posted July 20, 2021 On 7/10/2021 at 12:03 PM, PaganDawn said: Sometimes I write with words in rhyme What I cannot express in verbal times The thoughts that swirl.inside my head When emotions are full and need to be expressed. I hope you enjoy s glimpse into my souls About how I feel, what makes me whole **** In this world where I reside A constant presents walks by my side Holding my hand through *** and doubt A form I cannot live without. It holds my soul in gentle hands Controls my steps with subtle commands Guiding me to always strive Never letting my resolve subside. Who is this form I hear you say? Who journeys with you both night and day? He is my demon, he is my light He is the one who controls my life He brings me pleasure beyond compare He brings me *** without dispare. How can this be that you would give Your life to one who controls how you live? What power does he have to hold you so? Can you not walk alone, can you not just go? I have walked alone, thinking I was free I have walked with those that I thought loved me? But on my path I found That its not enough to just take a hand. This form takes more from me, than I alow the world to see. It climbs inside my very soul And tears apart the chains that hold The very darkest parts of me, and lays them bare for all to see. Who is this one who has such presence Who's strength and resolve can see your very essence? It must be strong and powerful beyond compare To hold and bind you in its snare? No my friend you have this wrong It did not come with strength alone It came with heart and passion and need It came with longing and want and greed It came to own and posses my soul It came to take and to Control But it is also weak and soft and kind It has its doubts and worries of mind It has a life like many do Full of stress and trouble too But in me it has found its release A place of safety a place of peace Where is can be all it wants to be A place where it can be truly free I give it strength as it takes mine I give it power to control and bind I surrender to its every need, I alow the darkness.a place to feed It holds me fast and I hold it Through times of trouble Through times of bliss I give it control, it gives me courage To just be me to grow and flourish And it has in me a place to be..completely open completely fee. It is not the clothes that make this one It is not the stature it is not just the Dom It is the way he gets inside.. Sees my soul, feeds my mind. In rags or riches it would be the same It is not the fortune it is not the name It is everything he sees inside It is how he takes what he requires It is how he allowes me to be To give to release to serve and be free In chains or cuffs, restraints or collar In *** or tears or ***ful *** I am exactly what he allows me to be For he has knows the real me And I will skip and step with pride As I walk behind his left side My path is his to choose for me Without reserve So.mote it be. A truly delightful, engaging and adorable poem my sweet. As I read the words I felt all your emotion. The love and affection, the connection, the fulfilment of why we desire this lifestyle. I’m blown away by your adorable words. Total brilliance, adorable and engaging. 😘😘
PaganDawn Posted July 26, 2021 Author Posted July 26, 2021 July 20, Steve78 said: A truly delightful, engaging and adorable poem my sweet. As I read the words I felt all your emotion. The love and affection, the connection, the fulfilment of why we desire this lifestyle. I’m blown away by your adorable words. Total brilliance, adorable and engaging. 😘😘 What can I say..I am so happy to ensure such words. And so glad to hear I got across exactly the emotions I intended. Thank you 😊😊😊
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