Something I wrote

[Deleted Member]

So I sent this to some people on here to get there opinions and they all seemed to enjoy it so I'm popping it here for everyone. I enjoy writing these passes the time and keeps the imagination and creativity fresh in and out of the bedroom... enjoy ...

"I get home from work and call out to you. I get no response. I call again as I enter. Still getting no response. I check every room and then I check our play room. There you are wait for me. You are on your knees in a submissive position naked and covered in a rope harness, looking down. "Hello master" you say quietly. I walk over to you and start slowly walking around you. "Does someone need to be punished?" I say down to you. You nod but do not speak. I stand in front of you reach down to your chin and make you look up at me. I drop your chin and take off my belt. "Give me your hands" I order you. You raise your hands infront of you wait to receive what I give you. I put the belt (that I had folded once) in your hands and walked to the closest wall to hang my shirt up. I use the belt to bind your hands for the moment. I raise you to your feet and lead you to the bed. I bend you over it, put your hands about your head and spread you legs, keeping them apart with a spreader. I walk over the the "play wall" and grab a paddle and whip. I walk back over to you. I remove the belt keeping your hands together, gold it once more and say "open your mouth" and I put the belt between your teeth. " now bite down and do not make a sound." I stand back up grab some rope and tie your hands behind your back. Then I grab the paddle and move it over your bare ass. "I'm gonna count 5 light and t heavy hits." "I do not want to hear a single sound from you." "Understand". You nod. I start light. "1, 2, 3, 4, 5 " your ass is read but not bight and you seem to enjoy it. "1" *smack* it shakes your body as you feel the first heavy hit, ass straight away bright red. "2, 3" there are tears starting to form in your eyes and you bite down harder. "4" you try to scream but no you can't. "You can scream with this one" *smack* "5" you squeal as the last heavy spank hits your ass. I put the paddle down beside you and whisper "you was a very good girl" as I wipe a tear from your eye. I untie your one and and flip you over, tie them back together inform of you and get the whip. I take out my belt and tell you you can whimper, but not scream for this one. I start tapping your clit *slap, slap, slap, slap* in rapid succession to each other and you bit your lip and it gets red and swollen. I start slapping harder with the whip and you whimper a little louder everytime. I then stop put my middle finger inside you a d pull it straight back out. I put my finger by your mouth, "taste it" I tell you as I push it in your mouth and pull it back out. I then get a clip from the wall and put it on your clit. I start whipping your tits and nipples next. I start to make your nipples red I hit the that hard with the whip. "God I love it when you are *** and weak." I throw the whip away and get 2 remote vibrators I put 1 up your ass and 1 in your pussy, which keeps sliding out it's that wet. I then grab a gag, come back over to you and put it in your mouth. "Ssshhh" I say and grab the remotes "let's see how long you last". I turn both on and a medium setting, and your jump up suddenly. You start to arch your back and squirm as you start to moan softly. "Hhmm" I turn your ass one onto full s***d and drop the one I your pussy to low. I see your eyes widen and ass clench as you try to stop it. I the swap them, pussy on full and ass on low and you start you arch more, moaning more and more heavily and trying to cross your legs or bring them in. "Time for the fun to start" I put them both one full and leave your for 5 minutes which I time on my phone, you moan loudly and often trying to make it stop by wiggling and arching but it's no good you just moan more and more and start to cry again. After 5 minutes I remove the vibrators and take off your gag. "You've been a good girl tonight now here is your prize" "do you want your prize?" I ask you "yes master" you say quietly and slightly nodding. I untie your hands and take out my cock. "Is this the prize you are after?" I ask you. "Are you going to beg for your prize". You beg for your prize for being good. I slowing put my cock inside you, it slides in so well you are so wet. I start thrusting slowing but quickly s***d up with how sensitive you are. "Say my name, beg me for what you want". You beg me for what you want and keep reply name and title. I get harder and faster, going deeper and getting more rough. Slapping your face and grabbing your neck. "You dirty slut" I tell you. I pull out and drag you to your knees on the floor. I thrust my cock into your mouth and make you deep throat it. Gripping the back of your hair I feel myself getting closer to cumming. "Make me cum your filthy whore" I let you play with my cock on your own accord. I moan loudly and keep your head on my cock as I cum, making you take it all"

[Leisa]

I love the vivid imagery you’ve created. It’s intoxicating and full. You left nothing out and gave just the right amount of detail to allow the readers mind open up and become part of your erotic story. Well done.

[TheMater]

What I enjoy the most is the mixture of pleasure and *** in my sub eyes. Pleasure because all the fantasies has come true and *** of making a mistake. 

She is already on the last thread of her energy. It is nearly impossible for her to stand or move. She had already cum multiple times. She has been tied up for long time and decorated with wax all over her body. Her butts are full of beautiful spank marks. She has been chocked more than she imagined. Now she will shiver from head to toe even with the sound of my breath. 
She want it to finish but devil inside her want more. She can not control her love for me. Seeing me getting satisfied keep her motivated. She is committed to make me happy at any cost. 

Now I will start the final task. I will bite her neck like a vampire. She will shiver but can not scream. Her mouth has been taped. Than I will pour warm wax on her nipples. Her whole body will go red. I will move down and make a wax star on her belly button. She shakes her head with *** and pleasure. And finally I will pour the remaining wax between her legs. She will try to close her legs with all energy but ropes will not let her. Her back goes like an arch. She closes her eyes. She start shivering none stop. 

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