Hurt me and I'll give you everything

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Hurt me please
With your big, bare hands
Brutal weapons; ruthless yet attentive
Wrap them around my throat and take my air

Make me bleed for you; find euphoria in the red
Take me to oblivion and back
Push me past what I thought was possible
Only to discover peace in fire

Leave your marks on me, your canvas
Striking, scratching, twisting
Make me cry as we split me open together
Mark your territory, leaving no doubt
Who I belong to

*** me to look you in the eye
With fistfuls of hair
Knowing the struggle I face
Searching deep in my abyss

Strip down the walls
Obliterate the war in my mind
Deliver me to the agony
I'll give you everything

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Both of your poems ended with tears falling from my eyes. I felt all your words in both. Really beautiful written poetry. Thank you

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1 minute ago, ladydv said:

Both of your poems ended with tears falling from my eyes. I felt all your words in both. Really beautiful written poetry. Thank you

Omg that's so kind of you to say. Thank you so much ❤️