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You arrive at the airport...thinking nothing other than another day another dollar as you collect your baggage and hail a taxi to your hotel room. However you do not notice a grey truck following you on your way to the hotel. The taxi gets you your things and before you can accept your luggage from him something in your mind tells you to look to your left. Not thinking anything of it you see a grey truck parked in a space with a Man sitting in the driver's seat. Again with all that's in your head for your next project you think nothing of it and proceed into the hotel.

Morning comes and you prepare for your daily grind you get ready and call for your taxi. The taxi arrives and you get in and tell him where to take you. As you leave the lot you notice the same grey truck but again thinking nothing of it and assume he is just another guest. You get to your destination, have a great day doing your project and the day ends and you are famished. You decide to go out and get something to eat but instead of a taxi you figure it's a great time to take a walk down the businesses in the area and find a local place to eat...As you walk down the boulevard you get an uneasy feeling your being watched and stop to look around but see nothing out of the ordinary and proceed into a local restaurant for food. You order your food and eat a lovely meal the waitress brings you your check and you notice something in particular underneath...A small folded piece of paper, curious as to why this is there you grab it and open it and see it's a note saying "I know who you are...I know what you do...I have been in the shadows watching you and admiring you from afar"

Not really understanding whether it's a joke or was meant for someone else you shrug it off and call for a taxi to return you to your hotel...you arrive and shower and clean up from your exhausting day...as you exit the bathroom wrapped in your towel you walk by the front door and notice another folded piece of paper as if it were slipped under the door...you grab it and begin to read "You are Mine and I will have you! I will show you how a real Man makes you scream and beg for more!"

You begin to get alittle frightened...After all this is now two notes and two different locations, clearly you are being followed.

At the same time, the realization of this has made your nipples rock hard, you feel flushed as if your staring into your most wickedest fantasy... yet still scared of who these notes could be from...

You slip into bed, turn on the t.v. and watch a movie, not being able to sleep right away but eventually pass out and wake up in the morning...you get ready for another days work and proceed to your next project. You arrive and just before you enter the building you see a grey truck parked across the street but no one inside and think to yourself "why does that look so familiar" but again your think nothing of it and proceed into work...

As the day starts to end you see a note not unlike the others you have received sitting atop your purse...you look around to see if anyone nearby could have put it there but no one is around. You open it up and read "The bell toles Soon Babydoll...soon you will be *** and at the Mercy of my wicked ways"

To be continued...

What would you say to this so far
Stepfubk4
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This is wickedly awesome! When's the next installment?!
Stepfubk4
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You're welcome! Good story so far, can't wait to read the rest.

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Well. To me it's narcissistic beta nonsense. Getting in someone's head by stalking is unacceptable unless it is in an agreed with the other party as a CNC roleplay scenario.
The thrill of placing someone in a ***, uncomfortable or ***ful situation is purely for the Dom.
So, sure, if this a story that you and your partner agreed on. Cool beans. If not, it's stalking, gaslighting, exploitative, abusive and unkind to someone you like in some way.
Now, with all that said, I am speaking from a heterosexual perspective.
And so, I would really like to hear how the dynamic I described differs in a same-sex scenario.
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I appreciate your comments however I don't think you understand the meaning of narcissistic "having an excessive or erotic interest in oneself and one's physical appearance" which has nothing to do with the scenario...this scenario is for only those that are thrilled with the idea of a stalking type of roleplay...a dominant satisfies his submissive before himself...I wish you would have asked me about the context of this scenario before writing your diatribe and I would have let you know I wrote many scenarios for many people and this is a request from a woman in the industry.
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0n reflection, I wonder whether it is the tone of the messages
They are aggressive and controlling and I do think so many people confuse dominance with control
Dominance insists on mutual consent.
Control doesn't.
Which is why you see control mentioned in so many offence against the person and never dominance.
I've said my piece. But May I suggest that you can create the tension and the mystery while removing the threat and control simply by reimagine your notes..

Maybe shorter more cryptic. Like a single word on a piece of paper that relates to the subject. Maybe a note at the airport in the cab with just the flight number on it.
And then the next note, has the name of a group of friends. Random that a few people would know keeping mystery.
And then the final note when it comes, just has one word on it.. and it's the secret safe word that only two people in the world know...

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You are more than entitled to your opinion and I accept how you feel about it... however it is only part one and if you feel the same after it's finished then I will respect that but at the core of the scenario it is what this woman I know wants it to be and that is above all what is most important... satisfying her need, wants and desires is all that is relevant, you can choose to like it or hate it but that's issue is within yourself and not the scenario...thank you for your time and efforts
Stepfubk4
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Dude really knows how to spoil a good time! Don't like, don't read it! 

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I am a very considerate man and everyone is entitled to their opinion and we can all make everyone happy...but as I stated I wrote many scenarios for individuals and take their requests and create what they want and do not care what others think to be honest...this woman I am writing this for is in the industry and has a profile on The site and I have written many for her and some have been used on film as well...I hope I do not offend anyone with my writings however an attempt to dictate or steer the path in which the story goes because someone feels that their opinion is all that matters is not going to be the outcome...
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On a side note...I am always willing to hear both sides of anything because it will only help me understand and grow as a human so whether you have something nice to say or not I am very open minded and will take anyone's thoughts, Concerns and or critiques and respect them and you as a individual
Stepfubk4
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Well, I look forward to the next installment! Keep it up!

FeistyFox05
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I'm rarely intrigued.
I'm intrigued now.
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Why am I wet right now?
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Can’t wait for the next part
Stepfubk4
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Will there be a part 3? I hope so?

Mezmerism
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Very well written. Thank you for sharing. I’m excited to read the next part…..

 

 

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