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And we film the whole thing and make you watch after will we take turns giving you more
  34 minutes ago, ChristySub said:

That's always a compliment for an erotic writer

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It’s fucking solid.
If you ever want to sext for the sake of literature got plenty of skill from isn’t at messenger era😂😈

Idk I thought it sounded like a sad and desperate life to live and I mean all 3 of them just sad poor people I love life and sharing it with just one person my love 3 never will work we are made to be with 0ne and if people think I'm wrong than they don't have what I do I'm only here for entertainment but I do learn and grow and spank my one now and my one likes it vary much wile in the swing
  45 minutes ago, blakelove77 said:
Idk I thought it sounded like a sad and desperate life to live and I mean all 3 of them just sad poor people I love life and sharing it with just one person my love 3 never will work we are made to be with 0ne and if people think I'm wrong than they don't have what I do I'm only here for entertainment but I do learn and grow and spank my one now and my one likes it vary much wile in the swing
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Monogamy can be beautiful and I'm glad your happy but in the same breath so can polygamy
Please can you message me and let me know how the story seems sad. Which character promotes that? I like getting feedback to become a better writer.

Ok so sir and ma'am sound vary dirty like they are some predatory type couple they are just disturbing and the fact that's what this girl wants is sad why would anyone choose this over a wholesome relationship
  Friday at 04:58 AM, blakelove77 said:
Ok so sir and ma'am sound vary dirty like they are some predatory type couple they are just disturbing and the fact that's what this girl wants is sad why would anyone choose this over a wholesome relationship
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So the fact refers to the male dom as 'feels like home' doesn't indicate there is a deeper connection? And the fact he tells her he loves her?

I'm trying to work out how I should write so that it is known the sub and male dom are a couple and the female domme is a play mate because it obviously hasn't come across like that

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