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I am starting a new storyline. I would appreciate any feedback on if you think it is worth completing or not.

I have only just started to write it and will add to it as I compete sections and chapters.

Angel Heart


Chapter One

He stands on the rise, looking off into the distance. His eyes mere slits against the harsh sun.

In his right hand, his full Bostaff. At his back, his favorite hand forged blade. Slung in it's sheath his well-used Bastard Sword.

She stood to his left and slightly to his rear.
Standing straight and proud, her Bostaff gripped in her left hand.

The dust trail rising into the sky was undeniable. Raiders had returned to their domain ,and soon *** would soak the dry parched earth.

He was Wolf Lord. Master of the roaming packs of Wolves that had found their way to him after the devastation of war.
Some say he could speak to them and they to him. Unfortunately, most who might could have given testimony to that fact had not survived.

She was his devoted slave and wife. She was ***some in her own way and strong of heart and brave. She was also under the protection of the Wolf Packs that ranged the Boundary Lands.

It is believed by many that he is an immortal Druid from ancient times. No one can remember when he came to the Boundary Lands because he was already there when others arrived.

She had arrived in her 38th year. A strong but gentle spirit. An impath with powerful visions.
It was said that she had led the scraggly band of survivors to the Boarder Land.

She saw him in a vision. A solitary figure standing on the hillside below the skyline.
In his right hand, the staff of Alder, which appeared to sprout from his arm.

She could feel his gaze as he looked into her vision. He turned and disappeared into the hillside. She knew he would be waiting for her, and their meeting would be her salvation or her death.
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