Dirty Little Slut

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Pre warning: im a bad writer but was ordered to write and upload this, so here we go.


"Spread your legs and rub your cunt through those panties. I'm interested to see if we can make them wet."
As terrified as the directness of the order made her, she found herself following before trying to think of a reply. Stopping only long enough to express her *** she couldn't do as well as he wanted she lay thinking how terribly humiliating the experience was. A man who had expressed no more an interest in her than in many others, a man she'd hardly discussed her life with and knew nothing of the person she was. And she allowed him to use her body to fulfill his desires, without so much as having to be in the room. 

The screen lit up again, an order to watch how long it takes. Feeling like a porn star being told how to fulfill the viewers desires she realized she could feel a very small damp spot already. Trying to rationalize she couldn't possibly be that wet so early on and convincing herself it must be her imagination she waited an additional minute before reporting it. She couldn't get the "we" out of her head. It was true, with him commanding exactly what she could do he was doing just as much, if not more, to her body than she was
 Not knowing if she could take the *** of him knowing how easy it was she just hoped he wouldn't question the time, although even with the added period it was far sooner than she would have liked.

If she could convince herself she hated it perhaps she could play it off to him as well. The aching in her cunt betrayed her, the wetness to her panties sold her out and made too difficult to imagine she wanted to stop. An order to continue worried her that she wasn't going to be able to stop any time soon. Perhaps what worried her more is a desire not to.

"Its already getting my fingers wet through them.  I can't believe that im doing all this, this is really humiliating to let you make me do it. And to tell you about it" Why did she feel the need to give so much detail, she asked herself. A part of her often ignored longed to be a good sub. She knew her discomfort and *** would bring him pleasure. She was slowly going from an independent woman to a sub just happy to please, and she hated seeing it happen but found herself aroused by how easily he brought it out in her.

"Uncover yourself. I'm allowing enough modesty with letting you keep your panties on." Why did it matter to her she be covered when alone? Was a shame of her own sexuality so deeply ingrained? Any attempt at understanding was quickly swept up in the gust created as she dashed the blanket. The cold all of the moisture trapped in her panties had created was nearly overwhelming, and the lack of coverage left her feeling terribly exposed even without an audience.

Knowing her kinks as well as he did only made her feel more revealed. Was there anything she had thought about he couldn't sense? It was his digging into her exhibitionism that made her feel most transparent. Promising to *** public scenes, promising to never let her look away from his peircing gaze. Though she had nearly abandoned the idea of denying her enjoyment, the newfound sensitivity of her cunt still felt a betrayal to her dignity. Was she eager to preform? Did she wish to show off? Or was she happy to let him strip any dignity for the arousal of the both of them? Whatever the answer she tried to continue rubbing as he wanted, desperately trying not to focus on the sensitivity, and not to look at the forward gaze of his picture.

The wetness created an irritation to her skin as she continued to press the panties against herself. Though she tried to control her thoughts she couldn't keep them from wandering. Would he humiliate her like that? Would he gather an audience to see her betray her own pride? What had started as occasional short quick breaths had turned into small pathetic whimpers over the sensitivity of her soaking wet cunt and the *** of doing such things upon command made it hard not to squirm, made it hard to keep her legs spread wide rather than instinctively shut them. Fighting her own instincts and her desire to finish herself off was a difficult enough feat, until he sent in his most degrading task of all.

"Get both hands all slippery and wet, so you can rub them on your face and tits." Was she really supposed to rub her own juices across herself? What purpose would it serve? Truly this was one of his stranger tasks to request. But her desire to be good had long taken over resistance and before thinking about skipping such a task she found her hand trailing downward. The *** of her assignment seemed to hit quite strongly, as she slid her hand under her panties her body jolted involuntarily from the stimulation. She closed her eyes as if that would make it less humiliating, and was at least thankful she wasn't required to report how wet she had gotten. Further to her dismay she realized after rubbing her tit with her own fluid her pussy had become far more wet than even the minute prior. 

Having thoroughly covered her tits and part of her face in her own juices she reported her success. Letting out another pathetic whimper at being called a good girl she found herself oddly disappointed to hear it was finished. She found a small amount of comfort in knowing the toy she had gotten out and was prepared to use moments before he messaged her, and oddly enough planning to use the previous night as her guide, she would now quite easily be able to finish and get to sleep.

"Do not fucking cum" Did he think she was some kind of deviant, always focused on her next orgasm? She had planned on having one that night, and possibly another based off of the interaction, and she found herself embarrassed to see her defense of herself crumbling. Was she really going to let him tell her when she is allowed to cum? And she found herself aroused by the idea, he was so confident he said it without a *** or hesitation.

As she lay down she only felt more embarrassed that she wasn't considering for a moment defying his command. Her body ached to be touched and her weak will found her stroking her clit knowing it would make everything more difficult. All she was allowed was gentle strokes through her panties, as per his orders, and no matter how it frustrated her she couldn't get anything more. Finally she decided it was only going to make it harder to sleep, and lay down with her legs spasming with a need for pleasure, being awake for another hour desperately trying to get the idea of his eyes out of her head.

[Cade]

Delightful debauchery.

[Ma****]

Very good, well done.

[Deleted Member]

Well, you are not a bad writer at all.. you are a very good writer.

[Re****]

Well written

[sissy_petra_uk_slut]

Very good, writing, keep it up.

[Leisa]

Bella that was such a great piece. You nailed it am I hope you continue writing.

[Vandalslut]

Fabulous writing, one of the best. Up there with @DanteReign and @phoenyx. Keep it going.

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  4 hours ago, Vandalslut said:

Fabulous writing, one of the best. Up there with @DanteReign and @phoenyx. Keep it going.

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It would seem I have some competition. I have not yet read this story, @Bluebella, but I will be sure to do so when I get a chance. I trust Vandal's opinion, so I look forward to it.

[Deleted Member]

I agree with everyone else that this was a good story, and I thank the person who urged you to post it. I hope you will not mind the constructive criticism, but I recommend that you proof read at least 1 day after you have written your stories.

If you would like to chat, writer to writer, I would be happy to help in a private conversation. Let me know if you do.

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  17 hours ago, DanteReign said:

I agree with everyone else that this was a good story, and I thank the person who urged you to post it. I hope you will not mind the constructive criticism, but I recommend that you proof read at least 1 day after you have written your stories.

If you would like to chat, writer to writer, I would be happy to help in a private conversation. Let me know if you do.

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I appreciate that, unfortunately with the time between getting the assignment and when I'm supposed to post i dont usually have a day to wait to edit