Release Me

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Run your fingers through the rapids of my breath

Observe my ache as it lingers without rest 

Still me with ropes and relinquish my mind

Unleash all your secrets, with a glint in your eye

 

Listen to my tremor 

Delight in every squirm

Make me a pretty mess

Until there’s nothing left to learn 

 

Take me to breaking 

As I arch and beg for more

Leashed, unleashed 

Destruction to the core

 

Release your best endeavour on every untouched nerve

Relentless like the whir inside until all that’s left is urge

Penetrate me with your urgency like a fight you cannot lose

Chase my heights with every stroke, become my body’s muse 

 

Complete me

Send heat to surge

Defeat me 

With pristine purge

 

Then wrap me up

With pride and praise

But when I’m gone

Don’t let me fade

 

 

 

 

[Deleted Member]

I really love this poem. It’s so well written and I loved every word. 

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  6 minutes ago, Unicorn_30 said:

I really love this poem. It’s so well written and I loved every word. 

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Why thank you. I’d forgotten I wrote this one. You brought my attention back to it. Not mastered the not fading bit yet though! 

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I haven’t mastered that either.  It’s not an easy one to master 

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I can’t believe that of either of you.🥰