Submission part one

[Wo****]

"Firstly, you will always address me as Sir. You will do what I say, when I say it with no hesitation. You will not answer me back or dare question me. You will use the safe word whenever, if necessary. You are going to be my slut. Is that understood"?

She swallowed, flicked a glance at him. "Yes" she whispered.

She yelped as he slapped her breast. "What was the very first thing I said to you, slut"?

Her eyes widened as she stuttered "Oh Sir, I'm so sorry Sir"

He smiled as he stroked her cheek, kissing her softly.

"Good girl"....

 

[Food-5952]

I will be all yours if you take me as your food and eat me

[Wo****]

  11 minutes ago, Food said:

I will be all yours if you take me as your food and eat me

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Pretty sure that's illegal.

[Food-5952]

Well,maybe ! It's my fantasy ; to be a dîner for a woman

[Wo****]

  3 minutes ago, Food said:

Well,maybe ! It's my fantasy ; to be a dîner for a woman

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I'm vegetarian.

[Food-5952]

Lol,,this is me! The onlyone i chat with ,is vegeterian !

[Deleted Member]

  On 8/10/2019 at 7:57 PM, LazyPiratesBounty said:

"Firstly, you will always address me as Sir. You will do what I say, when I say it with no hesitation. You will not answer me back or dare question me. You will use the safe word whenever, if necessary. You are going to be my slut. Is that understood"?

She swallowed, flicked a glance at him. "Yes" she whispered.

She yelped as he slapped her breast. "What was the very first thing I said to you, slut"?

Her eyes widened as she stuttered "Oh Sir, I'm so sorry Sir"

He smiled as he stroked her cheek, kissing her softly.

"Good girl"....

 

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As a fellow Dominant, I cannot say I would agree with some of his instructions, but it was so well written that I forgot he is only a character. A bit too short, I would like to read more, but an excellent start

[BigPolly]

  12 hours ago, DanteReign said:

As a fellow Dominant, I cannot say I would agree with some of his instructions

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Nooo I have had several Doms that have given immediate strict instruction & immediately put me in my place so that there is no room for anything other than what we were there for. You know who you are, what you are there for, the rules & how you will be addressed. This enhances excitement & anticipation 😁

[Wo****]

  12 hours ago, DanteReign said:

As a fellow Dominant, I cannot say I would agree with some of his instructions, but it was so well written that I forgot he is only a character. A bit too short, I would like to read more, but an excellent start

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Which instructions out of interest?

I'm genuinely flattered that you think it's well written and that you forget he is just a character.

Absolutely agree that it is too short (i have an idea for each scene, thing is i struggle to flesh it out)

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  On 8/10/2019 at 7:57 PM, LazyPiratesBounty said:

when I say it with no hesitation. You will not answer me back or dare question me

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@LazyPiratesBounty I just would not have said this myself. Every Dominant is different, and while I understand what @BigPolly has said, I just personally would have given different instructions