You jolt me

October 14, 2019

Chain me up, tie me down

Lose me in the sound

Creak of leather, clink of chain

Tease me again and again.

Bring me to my knees

Make me plead

Take me to the edge

Stand me on that ledge.

Crack of leather on my skin

The delicious *** begins

My body your toy

Take what you want and enjoy.

Then crawl into my arms

Safe away from all harm

I'll hold you close

As we ride the jolts.

October 15, 2019

All day x

October 15, 2019

Rhythm and rhyme. I love it. A little bit of editing could make it read a little bit more smoothly, but otherwise fantastic

October 15, 2019

6 hours ago, DanteReign said:

Rhythm and rhyme. I love it. A little bit of editing could make it read a little bit more smoothly, but otherwise fantastic

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Thank you... I think it's still a little clunky but almost there

October 15, 2019

Chain me up, tie me down

Lose me in the sound

Creak of leather, clink of chain

Tease me again and again.

Bring me to my knees

Keep up the tease

Take me to the edge

Stand me on that ledge.

Crack of leather, on my skin

The delicious *** begins

My body your toy,

Take what you want and enjoy.

Then crawl into my arms

Safe away from all harm

I'll hold you close

As we ride the jolts.

The improved version aided by @DanteReign. Thank you Mr Reign, you gave it the polish it needed.

October 16, 2019

On ‎10‎/‎14‎/‎2019 at 3:35 PM, LazyPiratesBounty said:

Rope me down, tie me up.

Voltage though my hard one.

Candle wax on my naked tum tum

Chain me up, tie me down

Lose me in the sound

Creak of leather, clink of chain

Tease me again and again.

Bring me to my knees

Make me plead

Take me to the edge

Stand me on that ledge.

Crack of leather on my skin

The delicious *** begins

My body your toy

Take what you want and enjoy.

Then crawl into my arms

Safe away from all harm

I'll hold you close

As we ride the jolts.

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October 16, 2019

Nice!

October 18, 2019

Beautifully written, LazyPiratesBounty. Thanks for sharing it.

October 19, 2019

On 10/18/2019 at 2:39 AM, Vandalslut said:

Beautifully written, LazyPiratesBounty. Thanks for sharing it.

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Thank you x

October 19, 2019

I can't write poetry at all - I can write anything else well, though. I showed your poem to my Lord, he thought it was great, too. And he isn't even in to poetry or much reading unless is about practical things. Hope you write something again soon. XX