Wo**** Posted October 14, 2019 Posted October 14, 2019 Chain me up, tie me down Lose me in the sound Creak of leather, clink of chain Tease me again and again. Bring me to my knees Make me plead Take me to the edge Stand me on that ledge. Crack of leather on my skin The delicious *** begins My body your toy Take what you want and enjoy. Then crawl into my arms Safe away from all harm I'll hold you close As we ride the jolts.
Deleted Member Posted October 15, 2019 Posted October 15, 2019 Rhythm and rhyme. I love it. A little bit of editing could make it read a little bit more smoothly, but otherwise fantastic
Wo**** Posted October 15, 2019 Author Posted October 15, 2019 6 hours ago, DanteReign said: Rhythm and rhyme. I love it. A little bit of editing could make it read a little bit more smoothly, but otherwise fantastic Thank you... I think it's still a little clunky but almost there
Wo**** Posted October 15, 2019 Author Posted October 15, 2019 Chain me up, tie me down Lose me in the sound Creak of leather, clink of chain Tease me again and again. Bring me to my knees Keep up the tease Take me to the edge Stand me on that ledge. Crack of leather, on my skin The delicious *** begins My body your toy, Take what you want and enjoy. Then crawl into my arms Safe away from all harm I'll hold you close As we ride the jolts. The improved version aided by @DanteReign. Thank you Mr Reign, you gave it the polish it needed.
ThinGuy Posted October 16, 2019 Posted October 16, 2019 On 10/14/2019 at 3:35 PM, LazyPiratesBounty said: Rope me down, tie me up. Voltage though my hard one. Candle wax on my naked tum tum Chain me up, tie me down Lose me in the sound Creak of leather, clink of chain Tease me again and again. Bring me to my knees Make me plead Take me to the edge Stand me on that ledge. Crack of leather on my skin The delicious *** begins My body your toy Take what you want and enjoy. Then crawl into my arms Safe away from all harm I'll hold you close As we ride the jolts.
Vandalslut Posted October 18, 2019 Posted October 18, 2019 Beautifully written, LazyPiratesBounty. Thanks for sharing it.
Wo**** Posted October 19, 2019 Author Posted October 19, 2019 On 10/18/2019 at 2:39 AM, Vandalslut said: Beautifully written, LazyPiratesBounty. Thanks for sharing it. Thank you x
Vandalslut Posted October 19, 2019 Posted October 19, 2019 I can't write poetry at all - I can write anything else well, though. I showed your poem to my Lord, he thought it was great, too. And he isn't even in to poetry or much reading unless is about practical things. Hope you write something again soon. XX
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